*Glows* Thanks so much! It took a long time to get them all just right, so I'm thrilled to know each of the sonnets is pulling its weight. Beginnings and endings, journeys and convictions...and yes, a lot of different shades of pain. There are lines I like in all of them, so I really couldn't be objective enough to choose a favorite.
The last two lines of the final sonnet _had_ to sum up the whole thing (believe me, the final sonnet was the most difficult part), so it's good to have confirmation that they work.
It does, doesn't it? Thanks again for the image--it suits both versions of the dæmonverse perfectly.
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Date: 2008-08-30 06:20 pm (UTC)The last two lines of the final sonnet _had_ to sum up the whole thing (believe me, the final sonnet was the most difficult part), so it's good to have confirmation that they work.
It does, doesn't it? Thanks again for the image--it suits both versions of the dæmonverse perfectly.