Wow...House and The Police? Beautiful. The whole thing was brilliant, but I particularly liked: "Pain is the fermata in a song half-sung" and "He’s the taker of chances, he who says, 'It might…'"

And Let's Talk Now of Diagnosis...how did you get all those medical terms to rhyme? Also, I loved House approving of Chase's methods, and Chases needing his daddy-figure to validate him. How cute!

I love the song Lily's Eyes and you did a wonderful reworking. Showing a vulnerable, softer side of the aunts? :)