I like a lot the way you manage the fact that every dialogue is a four-way interaction; Pullmann can of course do it splendidly, but for more normal human beings it is really impressive. I think Foreman in Cuddy's job is absolutely perfect, and consistent with the few cases of Foreman-as-House-s-boos we have seen in the show. Usually I think that particularly supernatural AU's take more effort to have the characters remain IC, but here it works really well.

I loved how Kylie saw through House and Minerva's bluff, forcing Minerva to show herself.

And I totally love Wilson as wolf, which both shows him as the very strong person he is and motivates his total deference to House - like a wolf would have to the head of his pack. It's amazing how he does all of House's paperwork and basically everybody accepts it as a fact of life.

I am just a bit unhappy that so many of the animals I'm unfamiliar with. All I can imagine when I think of a raccoon is a fat, misshapen stinky cat that rummages through leftovers - based on my very few experiences of raccoon encounters. And I've never seen a dingo. I also wonder how a free living raccoon would be like.